Teacher Feedback

Your blog needs a bit more work, including a full analysis of a student and real thriller opening from everyone in the group. Also some research into your mise en scene would be useful, i.e. clips from other films that inspire you would be ideal. Think of your blog as a production scrapbook.
I am also concerned that your ideas are over ambitious, i.e. how do you intend to film cut wrists etc?
It might be worth sitting down as a group and revisit the ideas process, come up with a clear idea of what you are trying to achieve. I am concerned you are struggling a little. Lets talk next lesson.