Feedback take two

how effectively edited is this thriller?
There were some highly effective transitions, clever distortions of colour

Give an example of a section of effective editing or a single cut that you liked and explain why?
The shot with the feet is excellently edited. the effect of the colour contrast with sepia tone looks both creepy and artistic.

Discuss the use of sound in this thriller, both diegetic and non diegetic what emotions does it invoke and how effective is it?
There is no non diegetic sound but the sounds that you have created fits in well with the footage excellently. at different points of the music highlights key points in the footage which works really well.

What words would you use to describe the visual style? Give an example of effective use of either props, costume and location?
The scene in the forest was great, a good location to set a thriller which made it look very realistic
the props used such as rope adds a sense of realism.

Highlight at least three things that you think are good about this thriller. and two areas for development or suggestions of how things could have been done differently ?
Editing and colour is effective
good effects
music is good fits the pace and mood

more close ups would add suspense and make it more mysterious.
Titles could be more mysterious font ect.